Just noticed that four of seven of the featured articles on the front page of gamedev are mine. Mind you, a couple of 'em are pretty minor, specifically a review of a book aimed at kids and a review of some kewl gamer-oriented bits. Still, I do a fair amount of semi-professional writing.

And apart from my official proofreader (Shelly), I get precious little feedback. As TANSTAAFL will attest, I'm a reviewer because I care about nobody's opinions but my own on. . .anything (and he was saying it as a compliment), but that only goes so far. Feedback can be a useful thing if it gives one room to improve.

So that being said, whattya think? Do I write too much? Too little? Is my tone too breezy? Not breezy enough? Do I use a form of subject-verb agreement that just rubs you the wrong way? Is my fanatical avoidance of ending sentences with prepositions something up with which you will not put?

If you got a minute, drop me a comment and lemme know what you think.